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The Green Knight  by Le Rouret 7 Review(s)
LynReviewed Chapter: 9 on 6/4/2006
Shouldn't want to mess with perfection, but.... Turnips grew everywhere on
England's soil (as far as I know), but I'm glad Legolas' squire didn't put them
in the casserole because turnips make everything taste like turnips...such a
strong flavor they have! Spices and many herbs; I suppose it could be argued
that trade through Harad may have brought some in, but sugar came from cane
grown in the Caribbean area, too far from Tolkien's known lands (I believe).
I believe tomatoes, like blueberries,
pumpkins, peanuts, corn, and potatoes, came from the New World, discovered
centuries later. I think Tolkien envisioned LOTR to be a prehistory for England,
taking place about 7,000 years or so in the past. Oh, well.

Pastries would have been possible, using lard and flour (alternating ice box
storage and rolling the dough) to create mille fleurs (misspelled), the
delightful thousand-layer pastry. Honey can be whipped with butter and whipped
cream is wonderful as are yeast breads, doughnuts on a stick, and meat on a stick.
As for fruit, I would think apples and wild strawberries, plums and grapes
would be available.

Thank you for sharing your story telling talent with others. It's a rare treat
to read such quality stories about one's favorite characters.

Orophins DottirReviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/2/2003
I have been shamefully remiss in not reviewing a story I have been enjoying so. This is so well done and the characters have depth to them. Bandy is a true joy. I loved the "Bandobras became so flustered he took Faramir’s soup from him and gave it to Arwen". I am not the world's greatest hobbit fan, with the shining exceptions of Pippin, Sam and Rosie Cotton, but this one is a charmer. And, the tournament minutiae with which I am renewing acquaintanceship! I can see how much research you've done. Grew up in the pre-computer days and my best friend and I used to have an elaborate medieval world we created for ourselves. He actually DID wear my scarf tied to his arm for an entire day as he went off on a quest I had set him!

Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil

fliewatuetReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/28/2003
Hmm, Bandy hasn't chosen the easiest job as servant/squire/cook of Legolas and Gimli. Especially Gimli seems hard to please. Though I do think that Bandy does an excellent job, even if his proper manners are somewhat lacking. But his good hobbit-sense is quite refreshing among all the stiffness of the courtiers.

Now I can't wait to see how the Green Knight will fare throughout the remainder of the tournament.

LamielReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/27/2003
I like Bandobras more and more. Seems very true to Tolkien's style of writing. I am a little concerned about the line "he took Legolas' long white hand in his own little brown paws"--maybe just because I'm from the States and am sensitive, but that seems very similar to some phrases from books like "Gone With the Wind"--a little condescending and could be read as border-line racist. I'm sure you didn't intend anything of the sort, and it is very true to Tolkien's idealization of the master/servant relationship, but given that you have modern readers you might want to be careful about that.

Otherwise this was a lot of fun--nice insight into the lords and ladies dining together, and Bandy definitely added a lot. I like that it was the Hobbit that demanded that they travel in style, and that Legolas' mother picked out his headwear. I don't think he'd care, himself--be perfectly happy travelling in his usual hunting clothes, wouldn't he; he isn't much of the usual prince type. Although he can certainly play the part when he needs to. Wonderful description of his dining clothes--what I wouldn't give to see Legolas in an outfit like that!

Lamiel

CorielReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/25/2003
It seems Brandobras and Legolas are quite taken with each other! The only thing that could be more endearing is if Thranduil entertained a soft spot for him too. ~ Interesting that Legolas' mother is still present; most have already set her aside somehow. But there is a lot of room to play where that family is concerned. ~ Yet another wonderful chapter; a great start to my 18th B-day!

TinnuialReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/24/2003
Awww....what a sweet ending to a lovely tale...please say you'll be adding more soon? I must thank you for distracting me for the better part of the last hour with this delightful story.....brings images of Ivanhoe to mind...what with knights in disguise and all. One of my favourite books, that one. I can't tell you enough how much I enjoyed your fantastic descriptions of the tournament and the surroundings, right down to the last detail. The effort is much appreciated.
I have a question though....was Aragorn mad at Legolas because he feared for his safety or did he truly think it disgraceful?

Sadly it's back to work for me now, but with a lighter heart and a smile on my face. Thank you again!
:)

ElemmireReviewed Chapter: 9 on 10/24/2003
Oh, that was lovely! I especially loved this line - “Well, that’s what we get, my friends, for surrounding ourselves with Elves and beautiful women – poetry and a delayed meal.”


:),
Elemmire

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