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In Darkness Bound  by Fiondil 5 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 39 on 1/26/2011
So,Morcocáno is still trying to cause trouble. I fear he will never learn, but hopefully will be stopped from doing too much damage. Once again, Ingwion is proving to be the best choice for ambassador.

Now enters Findarato. This should be most interesting.

Author Reply: Well, of course, chronologically speaking, this is the FIRST time Morcocáno causes trouble *grin* but you are correct that he takes a long time to learn his lesson. And Ingwion is doing pretty well as an ambassador, which is good training for when he later becomes the emissary of the Valar to the Elves of Tol Eressëa. And what will happen now that Findaráto has returned to Tirion remains to be seen.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Tari. I really appreciate it.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 39 on 1/15/2011
Excellent to see the issue brought out and dealt with. And why am I not surprised to learn that Morocano is a troublemaker even at this time in the history of Aman?

Author Reply: Hi Larner. I'm glad you found the way the issue was addresed. Ñolofinwë has the makings of a good (if not great) king; he just needs a bit more confidence. And as for Morocáno... well, he's the sort that just naturally lets his emotions rule him so he ends up causing more trouble for himself and unfortunately he doesn't quite learn his lesson over all those yéni until we meet him again in EI. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate you doing so very much.

AiwenReviewed Chapter: 39 on 1/14/2011
I burst out laughing at the last sentence. Nicely ended.

Author Reply: Glad you liked it, Aiwen. Thanks for letting me know. I appreciate it very much.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 39 on 1/14/2011
What is it with Finderato and food and when did he come back to Tirion, last I heard he was still in Valmar?!
I would be very concerned with elflings acting out on their parents predudices and attacking another elfling, "Cause Atto said they were bad!".
I see Morcocano is causing problems already, I hope Nolofinwe has the sense not to banish him to Formanos, he is the last person the Valar need there! He does not improve with age does he?!
Huggs,
Lynda


Author Reply: Hi Lynda. I guess Findaráto just likes to eat. *LOL* And yes, Morcocáno is causing trouble even this early in his career. What happens to him will be revealed in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I greatly appreciate it. Hugs back.

SunnyReviewed Chapter: 39 on 1/14/2011
I hope that using Ingwion as go-between for advice from Ingwë will be of some use, at least. I suspect both Nolofinwë and Arafinwë are feeling rather out of their depth, and having a source of unbiased support and advice will hopefully steady them a bit.

I see that Morcocáno's personality is as pleasant and sunny now as it will be when we see him in EI. But at least Sador is able to get along with him then. ;-)

Findaráto certainly has the art of making an entrance down pat! And his little quip was just perfect! (And just what _is_ for dinner?) ;-)


Author Reply: Hi Sunny. I'm sure Ingwion as a go-between will prove very useful. And Morcocáno's personality is pretty much the same as when we first meet him in EI. Some people just never learn, I guess.

Glad you liked Findaráto's entrance and his little quip. Unfortunately, I have no idea what is for dinner, but I imagine it's something very delicious if Elves are making it. *grin*

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate you taking the time to do very much.

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