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Drought and Doughty Hobbits  by Neilia 13 Review(s)
6336Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/15/2008
I could go all mysterious on you and tell you to add the middle 2 numbers together but actually it's my house number:<)!
Lynda

Author Reply: Hahaha! :D Love it! Your house number. Great thinking. Hugs, Neilia

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/14/2008
Though this was a serious work - I really had to giggle as I read the 'pilfering' line - all I could think of was Frodo and a certain farmer's mushrooms!

As I read about the hope of a good harvest blowing in the wind - I thought of those who were also just recently decimated by the floods and their hopes of a good harvest... difficult times!

I loved the line aoub the 'trees not interfering'... good thought!

And Bilbo's insistence that he could fight - I do not doubt it and am suprised at Frodo!

Good tale - I'm praying for rain for California too!

Author Reply: Thank you for your lovely review. Our nation's weather is sure testimony to global warming...too much rain and too much heat in the wrong places. Whew! I wonder what's next? Hugs, Neilia

SoledadReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Very touching. How terrible for the good people to work so hard on the fields all year, and then a fire threatens the fruit of their hard work.

Author Reply: Yes, it is terrible. Our farm belt has been flooded out...just as bad as fire, so we have to see what comes of that for our nation. *gulp* Hugs, Neilia

Baggins BabeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Those wonderful, determined hobbits. They don't give up do they? I love how they work together against the common foe.I loved the image of them dancing in the rain too.

Forest fires must be terrifying and heartbreaking. To see the land you love engulfed in flames is a nightmare. Thankfully we don't have that problem in Britain much unless we're in the middle of a real heatwave. Not much danger this year - we're somewhat waterlogged.

Author Reply: Yes, Hobbits are the best example in Middle Earth of binding together for the common good of all. As I have said before, Hobbits are a picture of the best of us. Send some of that Britain water over here! :D Hugs, Neilia

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
An excellent story, Neilia! And a worthy tribute to the fire fighters. I have a nephew who is a forester with fire fighting training in Missouri. In 2006 and 2007 he was called out west to help with the fires.

Bless them all!

Author Reply: Thank you, Pearl; Is your nephew here with us now? All the blessings from all folks are much needed. Keep praying! Hugs, Neilia

Esquire_of_RohanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Very good!

Author Reply: Thank you very much! Hugs, Neilia

6336Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Well we are getting a handle on the fires here, but I don't think the fire fighters would object to a little gentle rain!
Lynda,
(Who lives in SoCal)

Author Reply: Hello, 6336: Is there a meaning for your number? Thank you for your review. I, too, am praying for a gentle, but constant rain. A downpour would bring flooding to an already ravaged land. Hugs, Neilia

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
You captured the anxiety, the bravery of the fighters so well! I'm quite far from California, and I cannot begin to imagine how tense it is... now I think I see. The hobbits dancing in the rain was a wonderful image.
Praying for all down there,
Kitt : )


Author Reply: Thank you, Kitt. Even though I only have to endure a red sun and super hazy days, our home is safe in the middle of our northern city. I have kept a sharp eye on the news, praying that the fires will co-operate with the fighters. Still, when rain does come there will be dancing and rejoicing. Hugs, Neilia

Hobbit_FriendReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
A splendid tribute. You’ve skillfully captured many aspects of the fire battles here in California that I have read and watched about. The only part I have experienced first hand is the smoke. It is the worst when the smoke is low like a filthy fog bank that you have to breath when you go out. But most of the time in my area it is high above. Still, it’s strange and haunting to look up and see the red sun during sunset and sunrise and to look around and see everything bear a color that’s slightly off because of the weird light. A constant reminder of my state’s plight.

What a wonderful way to give tribute by telling a story about how our tough, valiant, adorable Hobbits deal with the same kind of crisis. Huzzah and kudos.

Author Reply: Thank you so much for the encouraging review. It was easy to write about smoke and fire when we have been in the thick of things. Hugs, Neilia

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/13/2008
Hi Neilia,

I, too, live in California, and while none of the fires were very close, the sky is too hazy to see all but the brightest stars, and I noticed a week ago that the moon was pumpkin-orange, as coppery as a lunar eclipse.

I think you've captured the underlying tension and fear of such a situation well, as well as the concern that the hobbit neighbors have for each other as well as themselves.

This is a fine tribute to all the firefighters who are fighting valiantly despite being spread so thin among so many fires (it's down to ~300 statewide, last I heard.... at one point it was ~1000.)

Well done, Neilia!

- Barbara


Author Reply: Thank you, Barbara! I thought the Hobbits were the best example of the best of us. Hugs, Neilia

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