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| When Trouble Came by Lily Dragonquill | 5 Review(s) |
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| cathleen | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/30/2008 |
| Oh, this is off to a wonderful start! Author Reply: Thanks, cathleen! I hope the rest remains as wonderful to read... it definitely was a joy to write ;) | |
| Periantari | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/22/2008 |
| ooo Very exciting beginning so far! There are so many questions to answer with that thrilling and angsty beginning. I eagerly await more. :) Author Reply: And they will be answered... at least I hope so :) | |
| SlightlyTookish | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/22/2008 |
| You can ramble at me any time! :) This looks great, a very powerful beginning! I love the Took Sight (as you know) and Paladin's dream is a great way of showing what is going on in Buckland. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Author Reply: Ah, but is his dream true? It might be, and yet his mind might paint a darker picture than is true. He doesn't know and neither do we. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/22/2008 |
| All are besieged. After all, who within the Shire would expect to be so betrayed by their own? It was perhaps poetic justice that Lotho died as a result of his own machinations, but it makes it no less sad for all of that. Author Reply: A betrayal like that neither could expect but I think Lotho's death made it easier for the hobbits to forgive him. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/22/2008 |
| Dear Lily, Wow! What a beginning! Paladin's vision was very disturbing. I call it a vision, because he is a Took. Of course we know that not all visions come true, but *he* does not know what the future will bring. So I can feel with him, torn between the Tooklands and Buckland, where his daughter and sister are! And what about Merimac with all the blood on his hands? Anyway, I'm hooked :) Can't wait for the next chapter! And to make sure that you won't forget your mother-tongue: Frohe Ostern Dir, Deinen Freunden und Deiner Familie! Author Reply: Paladin's vision is indeed very dark, but he doesn't know the truth. His mind may paint a darker picture because he is troubled about his own people as well - and yet it might not. The blood will be explained. Frohe Ostern! :) | |