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Turning Points  by cathleen 4 Review(s)
GoldenReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/4/2008
Very good job! Growing up indeed is not easy! All the new feelings and thoughts that arrive....
Looking forward to the next Chapter too!

Golden

Author Reply: Thanks sweetie, I'm so very pleased to know you're enjoying it!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/1/2008
Growing up is hard to do. I hope Pippin and Paladin have a good talk, I know those can be awkward.

Looking forward to more of this intriguing story :-)

Author Reply: Thanks so much, Pearl! Yes, I can't think of a more awkward talk between parent and child, but I know Pad can pull it off!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/30/2008
Poor lad--growing up can be so bothersome! At least he's now willing to talk to Frodo!

Author Reply: Yes, and I think that will prove to be a very interesting conversation!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/30/2008
Dear cathleen,

I've been following this story from the beginning on, and I think it's getting more and more interesting with every new posted chapter.

Pippin is growing up and that would be confusing enough for a lad, may he be hobbit or mankind. But that's not all. The "Took Sight" is also awakening and disturbing his dreams.

Maybe the talk with his father will help Pippin to understand some things better, but I would say that a visit to Bag End and a talk with Frodo would be much better!

I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author Reply: Andrea, I want to thank you so much for continuing to read my stories and comment on them. I'm very pleased to hear you're enjoying this. I'm having fun writing it! More soon, most definitely!!

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