News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
| About Us News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
|
| The Secret of the Wooden Wall by Lily Dragonquill | 4 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2007 |
| OOOO! Off to a wonderful, mysterious start Lily! I look forward to more :-) Author Reply: Thanks a lot! | |
| SlightlyTookish | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2007 |
| Yay, you posted it! What a creepy, descriptive beginning. I really like your Paladin and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :) Author Reply: Yes, I finally posted it. I'm glad you like my Paladin. I sometimes wonder whether I write my characters too much alike or too friendly. But then, they're hobbits :) Thanks for reading. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2007 |
| Ooh--nice and mysterious! Now, to find out what's behind that wall, and what the girl wishes found! Author Reply: It's up to Paladin now - mostly. But he has help. | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/8/2007 |
| Wow! That story is rather scary! It reminded me of Pearl's stories about Jebbin and Other Brandybuck who met the ghosts of Peregrin and Meriadoc! But that was hundreds of years later! So, who's that girl and what powers does she have to make Paladin feel her emotions, even physically? And why is that passage closed? At least Paladin is not alone! Merimac will help him as much as possible. But in order to do that he must first understand, what is happening to Paladin. And that might be difficult, I bet! The later generation is included as well? Then, I'm looking forward to see at least Frodo in this story :) Merry and Pippin might have also an appearance! I'm looking forward to reading more! Author Reply: Paladin has the "Gift of Sight" as you might remember. That's what causes him to see her. As for the rest... wait and see :) There will be Frodo, a bit of Pippin, and a very very little bit of Merry too :) Thanks a lot! | |