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Agape's Attempts  by Agape4Gondor 6 Review(s)
blindrainReviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/6/2010
(shudder)
Yeah, that happens to me, too (the horrifying things that occured on Middle Earth bit...).
Morgoth wasn't very nice, was he (wry smile)?

Good story...

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/26/2008
Wow, this is powerful! It was chilling when Elrohir recognised the joy in the orc's eyes - have the twins come to enjoy the same love of death as them? But when he saw the second orc and knew him - just wow. Great stuff!


Jay


Author Reply: *blushes* Many thanks - such kind words from my favorite 'Twins' writers is too much!

As for the love of death - I won't be writing more on this - but it does seem Elrond has something to be worried about.

Again - 10,000 thanks for the kind words!

6336Reviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/25/2008
Sometimes the Muse strikes at the oddest moments much to your readers delight at another story to read!
So Melkors Lieutenant, Sauron is still at work twisting elves into Yerch!
Poor Elrohir to have to learn his cousins fate that way, he can take comfort in the fact that Inglor is at peace in Mandos and will be Reborn one day!
More please,
Lynda

Author Reply: Oh Lynda - Reborn is an unfortunate word - I believe poor Inglor used his one reborn 'ticket' and that is it. I've never thought Orcs go anywhere once they die - soul less - and doomed to disappear to dust....... I hope I'm wrong.

I'm not sure whether this is a 2nd age elf.... I'm not sure if Sauron was still twisting Elves - but that really doesn't matter - what matters is there was still something of Inglor inside and it tore Elrohir's heart out.

Thanks for our kind words.

PS - I've got TA 3018 complete and will be posting it on Monday... just doing last minute tweeks. As for 'Sword' - 10,000 took precedent - I'll write again very soon! THANKS!!!!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/25/2008
I see what you meant in the comment you made about Imogen! Oh, yes, a terrible thing to find--a cousin's eyes in such an enemy! And so in keeping with canon! (Shuddering!)

Well done, Agape!

Author Reply: Many thanks! I shuddered myself when the thought came!

Your kind words are MOST appreciated!

Calenlass GreenleafReviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/25/2008
Slightly disturbing when I figured out what had happen, but it was certainly saddening.

Intense, thought-provoking, and well-written.

~Calenlass

Author Reply: Thank you very much! The thought itself came in a flash of horror!

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 66 on 11/25/2008
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep.

I hope Elrohir is beginning to understand what the rage that runs through his veins is turning him into. Seeing that must have been a really nasty shock--but a needed one.

Powerfully well written; whatever your Muse is doing she(?) is doing it right.

Author Reply: I'm hoping that Elrond will eventually be able to break through the grief and help his sons return to some normalcy... 'course - being part Noldoran doesn't help! :)

Thank you so much for your kind words. I blush!

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