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Agape's Attempts  by Agape4Gondor 2 Review(s)
Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 46 on 10/1/2007
Good but I would have liked a wee bit more, it ends too abruptly. You describe the energy of the event wonderfully!!

Author Reply: Oh Pearl - it ended too quickly for the brothers, too! I think, even if Denethor had not interrupted, they would not have begun again. Perhaps they would have egged on another of their comrads. Glad you enjoyed the energy - I got up and danced after writing it. NOT!

Thanks ever so much for reviewing!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 46 on 10/1/2007
Oh, Denethor, don't push competition where it's been given over!

A wonderful, delightful incident to contemplate, the brothers Hurin dancing together! Heh!

Author Reply: I so loved this scene. In the midst of the horror that is Gondor in these days, it is a blessing to take a moment to rejoice in life.

Denethor learned competition, I think, while Thorongil was living at Minas Tirith. You can't blame the man.

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