Stories of Arda Home Page
About Us News Resources Login Become a member Help Search

Out of All Knowledge  by Budgielover 4 Review(s)
Pearl tookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/27/2003
It is 12:15 AM, so I'm not sure how coherent I'll be, nor how good my spelling shall be! lol

This is a wonderful tale, The care and concern that everyone is showing. I loved Pippin comforting Merry - one doesn't often see that, it was well done. You write such thorough responses and I feel I too often don't, even when it isn't late, or early as the case may be! I am looking forward to reading the rest of the story as you post it.

Pearl Took

NilmandraReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/18/2003
The detail in this is beautiful - I can see the scene you have crafted perfectly. Elrond is graceful and gentle, yet strong and sturdy. The hobbits are perfectly done- Merry so strong and Sam so devoted and Pippin so..Pippin :)

I am glad Frodo sleeps, for I also do not want him to suffer.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/18/2003
Nice detailed, domestic scene. The concern of these people for one another is touching.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/18/2003
Oh Budgie, you can't imagine how happy I am every time I see that you've updated... ANYthing! Bilbo continues to be such a pillar of strength and practicality. You write him beautifully.

I particularly love---

"The young hobbit’s hands trembled; he was so exhausted that it frightened him, and he did not want the others, especially Pippin, to see."

"...six pairs of eyes tracking the spoon’s progress..."

Return to Chapter List