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Elf, Interrupted: Book One: Glorfindel Redux  by Fiondil 6 Review(s)
hawkeyeReviewed Chapter: 40 on 12/12/2014
I was wondering if Ingwë had a temper somewhere. Now that the initial shock is over I think he may feel a need to reestablish himself, or at least his control. He hasn't lost control, but I think he felt vulnerable. For someone who is used to being in charge, that must have been a truly terrifying experience.

What really disturbed me was Glorfindel's treatment (or lack thereof) at the hands of the "healers." As a "healer" myself, the rule is first and foremost "do no harm." Yet the healers do just that. Not only do they fail to treat Glorfindel appropriately, they do him extensive emotional harm. As much as I sympathise with Ingwë, I'm glad Lord Námo stepped in when he did. Hopefully the healers and Ingwë will be more careful in the future.

Given Ingwion's initial reaction, I was afraid we might be headed back to square one with everything. I so hope, for both Glorfindel's and Ingwion's sakes, that they can be brothers in the future. Glorfindel especially needs the friendship, and I think Glorfindel could probably teach Ingwion quite a bit as well. I also really liked Námo's reminder of Glorfindel's past. Sometimes it is easy to forget :)

Thank you for a wonderful chapter. :)

Author Reply: Hi Hawkeye. Oh, yes, Ingwë has a temper. Indeed he is known for it because it happens so rarely, but when it does, everyone ducks and takes cover. *grin*

The healers were absolutely clueless about dealing with a Reborn, and one that had suffered a traumatic psychic shock. Luckily, Námo stepped in. Ingwion and Glorfindel are destined to be gwedyr or otornor, as we will see.

Thanks for reviewing. It's appreciated.

KayleeReviewed Chapter: 40 on 8/7/2008
Manwë sighed. "I am afraid our good intentions backfired."

"Or not," Námo countered and all the other Valar gave him enquiring looks. "I noticed that in the two cases where the elf made it to his ultimate destination, neither arrived at any spatiotemporal coordinate where they were likely to meet themselves or others who knew them. I remarked to Erunáro as we were pursuing Glorfindel that possibly Eru himself had a hand in it, steering our fleeing elves to a spatiotemporal point well after the significant historical event in question. In Ingwë’s case, that was after the elves departed on their Great Journey; for Glorfindel, it was well after all had perished or fled Gondolin, leaving only a dead ruin."

"Then you think Eru was responsible...?" Yavanna started to ask, her expression one of surprise.

Námo shook his head. "Responsible for the near disaster to Ingwë and the others? No. Capable of taking advantage of the situation when it arose, I have no doubt." This last was said with a knowing smile.

"Nor do I," Manwë said, his eyes twinkling with humor as well.



*grin* Eru is always full of surprises, isn't He?

not to mention a certain elfling Balrog-Slayer...*grins* I can't remember when someone said Glorfindel was put in the Valar's path simply for his entertainment value, or something along that line...but I have to say I agree with that sentiment *giggle*

~Kaylee!!

Author Reply: Eru is indeed full of surprises... and with someone like Glorfindel to deal with He has to be two steps ahead of everyone else. LOL

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 40 on 2/12/2008
Quite a reality to waken to. Restraints! Oh, brother! Some folk need a hit up alongside the head with the rubber hammer of reality!

Author Reply: The healers are clueless about what is really happening to Glorfindel and Ingwë's refusal to allow the Valar to help makes the situation even worse.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 40 on 2/20/2007
Poor Glorfindel! He really didn't need to wake to find himself tied to the bed. But still - he seems to have found a good friend in Ingwion.

And if even the Valar are confused and left scratching their heads, what chance to the Eldar have of understanding what happened!

Author Reply: Yes, what happened to Ingwë and Glorfindel, among others, is something that the Valar never anticipated, though they will have plenty of time to think about it, and so will the Eldar. Perhaps between the two of them, answers will be found.

And I think Ingwion will prove to be a very good friend indeed....

hanciReviewed Chapter: 40 on 2/19/2007
The Valar's analysis of the situation is very interesting. And Lirulin was a special case indeed.
I just love that Eru laughed with them at Varda's joke, it somehow makes His presence, and caring, more real. More real than all the manifestations before, if that makes sense.
Glorfindel's waking didn't go well. Tying him... they could be glad they didn't understand Sindarin. A pity there was no one to handle it better.
Ingwion will be a good friend.

Third stage in their existence? What do you mean?







Author Reply: Tolkien mentions that in the third stage of their existence (however that's defined; he never actually said) the male elves tend to grow beards, hence, Círdan, who is considered one of the oldest elves. How old exactly one has to be, I have no idea, but I suspect any elf that woke up in Cuiviénen would by now be entering that stage.

Reviewed Chapter: 40 on 2/17/2007
Ingwion is handling her nervousness quite well. Poor guy! And poor Glorfindel!

It is so nice to see the overwhelming love the Valar have for the Eldar. What a beautiful tale you are telling!

Author Reply: Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying this tale so much. Yes, the Valar have a great deal of love for the Eldar, more than the Eldar can ever fully appreciate or even comprehend. As the (physical) representatives of Eru in Arda at this time, they show the love that Eru has for all his Children.

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