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Neath Anor, Ithil, and Gil  by Larner 5 Review(s)
AntaneReviewed Chapter: 62 on 9/16/2009
I am finally, finally getting to this! It's only been sitting in my inbox for a month now I think and I started it but never got back to it. Love the addition of the statues at the Cross-roads and even more that Gandalf and Bombadil have replaced the Two Watchers! :) Love that this retracing of the steps is being taken, would that we could also, though my courage would likely fail at entering the Lair itself, but perhaps not. Love also the invocation of the Weaver - most appropriate - and the tree growing where Frodo fell. What a hopeful story of life returning to a dead place.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: Who better to guard against the memory of the dark than two who ever represent the Light? Glad you approve! If the builders of the stairs knew of the presence of Ungoliant's child in the tunnels overhead, I can well imagine them invoking both Vaire and Lorien to protect those who must go that way.

And what better to mark the place where Frodo was felled by Shelob? So glad you approve!

Thank you so very much!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 62 on 8/22/2009
A beautiful story which i enjoyed very much.

Author Reply: Oh, I'm so glad you did, Linda. I was so glad for the prompt this month--this was one story I truly appreciated!

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 62 on 8/22/2009
A lovely tale of youthful adventure and Ringbearer legends coming together in the Fourth Age. I like the easy relationship between Elboron and Eldarion and Alphros; who will one day inherit princedoms and two kingdoms. Not sure who the Lady was; Yavanna perhaps, or a Maia? Great to see that Faramir's son had a hand in finding the remnant of the staffs his father gave to Sam and Frodo...

Author Reply: I suspect that the Lady was Yavanna, myself. Heh! And I cannot imagine Eldarion not allowing Elboron to be left out of any such adventure as he might have set himself. I find I love both youths a good deal, and Eldarion no more than Elboron.

Thank you so very much, Raksha. The next generation deserves getting its own kudos now and then, as you can imagine! Heh!

Baggins BabeReviewed Chapter: 62 on 8/18/2009
This is marvellous, Larner! A look at the next generation of princes and a wonderful discovery - that the staff took root and grew in that formerly dead land.
I'm glad Aragorn was also able to visit the place and see for himself that the land was living again.

Eldarion is already proving himself to be a worthy heir - and of course he refers to the Ring-bearer as 'Uncle Frodo.'


Author Reply: Thank you so, Baggins Babe. Yes, the former Mordor continues to recover from its ages of desolation, and the Powers themselves put in a hand now and then....

And how else would Aragorn's children refer to Frodo than as "Uncle Frodo"? Of course!

Thanks again so very much!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 62 on 8/18/2009
You've done it again Larner - this is a wonderful tale of growing young men testing their strengths. A joy to read and one to savour.

Author Reply: Bless you, Harrowcat! I'm so very glad you feel this way! Yes, Eldarion, Elboron, and Alphros have experienced a unique moment in time, have they not?

Thanks so very much!

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