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| No Man's Child by anoriath | 2 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/3/2019 |
| And so they are bound. May they know some level of joy with one another. Author Reply: :) We shall see, shan't we. | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/3/2019 |
| Suitably solemn (and credible) wedding ceremony. I don't understand why the ceremony was held so quickly after the bride consented to the marriage; couldn't they have given her a few days to get used to the idea of becoming Mrs. Heir-of-Isildur/Chieftain of the Dunedain? Also, you have the wrong millennium in the date; it should be 3008, not 2008. Nice touch that the wedding vows are in "Elvish" (presumably Sindarin). Author Reply: Also, you have the wrong millennium in the date; it should be 3008, not 2008. *snort* Okay. That's kinda funny that I did that. Thanks For the catch! Nice touch that the wedding vows are in "Elvish" (presumably Sindarin). Thanks! I'm trying to capture different levels of formality and class with language use. We'll see how successful I am at it. And I presume you've found the answer to your first question in your comment to the next chapter. | |