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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 3 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 62 on 5/6/2007
Of course, chopping Devorin up after he was dead wouldn't bother him at all. But it's still better for Aragorn not to have that done.

And five years exile doesn't seem too bad a penalty. Fontos will, hopefully, learn more positive lessons from it than resentment and bitterness. Especially since he's not going to lose his lands.

The rewarding of the good is better for the king. Shame he can't see that, however much Damrod etc did in his support, FARAMIR DID FAR MORE.

Author Reply: Thank you for your much appreciated review.Aragorn seems to have a lind spot where Faramir is concerned,alas.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 62 on 5/1/2007
Aragorn is unleashing the full might of the Kingship on the evil men who betrayed and hurt him; and it's certainly high time! Good for him, sparing Fontos; and rewarding Damrod and Bereth, not to mention acceding to Arwen's sensible request for a quicker death for Dervorin.

Now he needs some nice sleeping pills, or to read some crop reports or something.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. Aragorn seems to maintain his good sentese and wisdom with everyone save poor Faramir so it seems !

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 62 on 5/1/2007
I am glad that Damrod got his rewarded even though he tries to defend Faramir.

One query or small niggle from me is the word 'henchmen'. I don't know why but it just feels wrong to me - too melodramatic or corny may be? Perhaps 'cohort' perhaps.

But I don't know why I am quibbling over one word when I am enjoying the whole so much.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and suggestion. I have changed 'hencemen' to cohorts' and agree it sounds much better. I'm so pleased you are enjoying the story.I'm so pleased you are enjoying the story,just one chapter left.

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