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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
JuliaReviewed Chapter: 30 on 10/7/2006
Elbeth is a sweetie, but it looks like poor Fara is about at the end of his rope, physically and emotionally. I guess there's no chance we can have one of the drs. from "Grey's Anatomy" or "ER" pop in and give him a break in caring for his King? Nah, that would be a deus ex machina as well as one of those "I suddenly found myself in ME" things, neither of which make for good stories. I guess we'll just have to trust the Steward and his niece to get the job done, though it doesn't look as if it's going to get any easier with Aragorn about to wander out into the snow and cold.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm glad it is coming across that poor Faramir is almost at breaking point.Even if Tarostar turned up it would help,Elbeth will have to do though !

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 30 on 10/7/2006
Elbeth is good for Faramir - I think he might well lose his grasp on what he's doing if she wasn't there. He's has about as much as he can take.

And Aragorn is in a proper state - I hope Faramir and Elbeth catch up with him soon. This is not the weather for him to be running around half-dressed.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm glad it is coming across that poor Faramir is almost at breaking point.Poor Aragorn will freeze if not found soon so Faramir needs to wake up.

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