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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 20 on 8/4/2006
Branding him! Don't make Faramir do that! He'll never be able to forgive himself for that. I thought it was a hopeful sign that Fontos was not there... maybe he isn't really a bad man. Maybe there could be another one on Faramir's side, even if he doesn't know it yet.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.You are right that Faramir could never forgive himself if he goes ahead and could Aragorn forgive him either?I'm pleased you noticed that Fontos was absent.I am so pleased that you are reading my more polished version here !

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 20 on 8/3/2006
Sob, sob. Both our heroes are in the abyss now. Only Aragorn thinks he's been completely betrayed by Faramir, and Faramir's in no position to tell him otherwise.

Painfully riveting chapter.

Author Reply: MAny thanks for your much appreciated review. Your comments always make the hard work of editing these chapters worthwhile !
I hadn't thought before that both are in the abyss, but you are spot on.

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