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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 18 on 7/21/2006
Oh my, Aragorn's in big trouble here. At least in the future, he may not be so imprudent as to walk around Minas Tirith late at night alone. That is, if he has a future.

Good description of how Aragorn was caught and humiliated, and the start of what has surely been a painful few weeks.

Obviously the hunting lodge, and especially the wine cellar, are not going to get a five-star rating from the Middle-earth tourbook.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

I think Aragorn was so used to being alone,he could hardly comprehend now he was King he could be in danger.

I'm glad you felt the desciption of Aragorn's capture worked.It was painful to write. I don't think his accomodation is worth even one star !

Gandalfs apprenticeReviewed Chapter: 18 on 7/20/2006
Good heavens! What a way to treat the king! Faramir to the rescue!


Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and welcome to the story !It is adreadful way to treat poor Aragorn.

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