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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 3 Review(s)
RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/18/2006
Goodness! Poor little Elbeth to be with all of those horrible, wicked people. I can't wait for her to be rescued out of those peoples' hands - she needs to be out of there just as much as Aragorn does! And, Faramir having to sit and eat with them - shudder - maybe he can be sick later. :)

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.
I hated writing that meal and to think an innocent child was present! I needed though to show just how depraved Aragorn's captors are.
I am sure Faramir is feeling queasy.I would imagine having to kiss Fosco was the worse part so far.

JuliaReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/15/2006
Hi,it's me! I loved the detail you added to this chapter, and yes, I did find Faramir convincing. If I was one of those wicked traitors, (which I could never be as I love Aragorn so much!) I would be entirely convinced by the Steward's performance, and think he was also a traitor.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.
I'm so pleased you found Faramir convincing for he would find it as hard as you would to betray Aragorn.
Must fly to get ready for the BBQ !

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/14/2006
Ick-ack; what a bunch of slimy characters. If I were Faramir, I'd take a long shower after that meal. And poor Elbeth, alternately fussed over and neglected, and shown a deplorable example with her mother letting herself be pawed so indecently in public. That Hanna is quite the loose cannon, in every sense of the word!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.
Faramir will feel like washing a lot after being with this bunch of characters.
I felt sorry for Elbeth when i was writing this.

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