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Web of Treason  by Linda Hoyland 4 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/15/2006
Nice touch in revealing Arwen's power. Poor Faramir's in for a rough ride here; Arwen is obviously not going to back down in her convictions, or her attempts to make Faramir share them.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I thought it would be fun to explore Arwen's power as she is usually depicted as all sweetness and light,but she is Galadriel's grandaughter and Elrond's daughter and has surely inherited something from them.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/11/2006
What an interview!

Arwen is right, though - and able to convince Faramir of her point. The boy's been suckered. Now he's going to have to decide what to do about it - and with very few clues to go on, too.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I do not eny Faramir when arwen is in Galadriel mode !He is going to have to play detective.

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/10/2006
Oh, good for Arwen! Make Faramir see the truth here... hopefully she will be able to show him that these dreams he is having are really cries for help and he will be able to find him now. Though, I'm thinking there is much more anguish ahead for all of them! :)

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I wanted to show in this story,something of jusy how remarkable Arwen is. I fear you are right,there is indeed lots of anguish ahead !

Lady SarumanReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/8/2006
Hmmm, sorry for no review for the last chapter. I really ran out of time, and so now I've come and write one last review before our state tests appear tomorrow to torment us. Four hours a day! That's enough for anyway, and don't forget, this is only middle school. I don't want to imagine what's going to happen....><

Anyways, I would never have imagined Arwen being so crude to Faramir. I didn't think she would accuse him either. Surprisingly, she realized that the man who died wasn't him whereas Faramir could not. I would have thought that Faramir would suspect something since he didn't feel that his soul was "ripped in two." Yes, you do indeed give this story several twists to it. That's one of the many reasons why I enjoy reading your stories.

-Lady Saruman

P.S. Keep it up with the updates!!!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. YOu have been much missed.

Arwen only acts in the way she does because she is so upset,usually, she is gentle and gracious.Faramir has only been introduced to Thought sharing a few weeks before, so does not know exactly how breaking the bond would effect him, Arwen has been Thought sharing for centuries.

Good luck with your exams.I truly hated them when I was at school and am very glad I don't have to take any more !

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