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| Fear by Ariel | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lily the Hobbit | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 12/6/2004 |
| I am a very slow reader, besides there is a lot of distraction :) This chapter was so beautifully done... and the ending.... AWW!!! Author Reply: Awww! Yes, I thought, after all this angst, we needed something gentle and positive. I am glad you are enjoying it, no matter how long you take to read it. Ariel | |
| elentari | Reviewed Chapter: 13 on 9/13/2003 |
| Wow...what a story... i read all 13 chapters in one sitting... i was so intent on learning what happened to poor young Frodo... It was so great that you kept me at the edge of my seat like that!!! Thanks a lot for the story... I felt like chapter 13 was like the ending, but not really because the other storylines, like Clearwater saying that Frodo might have probably brain damage wasn't expanded on... but Frodo woke and is conscious (and NOT brain damaged), so i guess that's all that matters =) Very cool fanfic.. i'm glad you wrote about his parents like that.... and Dody is an interesting character as well... i thought that he would be more "evil" but then again it is not hobbit nature to be too revengeful... Great piece! Looking forward to reading more, (if there is more) =) Author Reply: Thank you, Elentari! Rest assured, there is definitely more. This was the first story I ever attempted to post while I was writing it - and that method has its drawbacks - like long periods between updates! :( Sorry! But the tale is all plotted out and there are approximately 8 more chapters to go... there will definitely be more with Dody and with Frodo - there are some very unresolved issues between them, between Drogo and Clearwater, and you will see, between Primula and Frodo. The story is called 'Fear' for a reason - it is all about overcoming fears... and so far we have only just gotten the 'set up' finished! Ariel | |