Stories of Arda Home Page
About Us News Resources Login Become a member Help Search

Burden of Guilt  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 9 on 9/17/2005
Well - I'm glad the baby is on its way. Unfortunately so are a lot of other things!

Author Reply: Yes I fear that is the case !Many thanks for your review.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 9 on 9/15/2005
Sweat-streaked sparring Dunedain - and then they start stripping off shirts! I think a Faramir/Aragorn sparring scene should be regularly featured in your stories. Nice humorous bits about Aragorn's disheveled hair.

Aragorn's pleasure at Faramir's good state of health and relaxed emotional state seems strangely ominous...I keep hearing the shark theme from the movie JAWS in my head...

Author Reply: Thank you for sending my first review of this for several days !I'm pleased you liked the sparring scene.It was fun to write and a theme Imay return to in future. I had them change their shirts for several reasons, to please their wives,also to please my readers and then to show how comfortable Faramir now was with Aragorn after being so shy in Shadow and Thought.

You are quite right,cue ominous music !

Return to Chapter List