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Burden of Guilt  by Linda Hoyland 2 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/18/2006
"”As for you, young man, your father would be ashamed of you to see you looking like this! He had his faults, did Lord Denethor, but he did at least see his sons were properly dressed!” "

Snork! Leave it to Ioreth to put the situation into a proper prospective.

Will the poor guys just die of embarrassment here and now, or wait until they reach the Citadel?


Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and making me smile.
I see the people of Gondor as inclined to fuss over details and ignore the real problems, take Imrahil for example,fussing over protocol while Faramir is dying !
At least Ioreth spared them death by embarrassment!

StefaniaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/10/2005
Hey Linda, I know that you have posted this tale elsewhere earlier, so I'm not the first to tell you this, but here goes ...

Your story so far is a riot. I'm forewarned that it's going to get dark, but for right now I'm really enjoying the comedy.

- Steff (aka StefaniaB)

Author Reply: Thank you so much for your kind review.

I'm delighted you are enjoying the comedy and you are the first on this site to review this chapter ! Often reviews at a later date are the most apppreciated,as you know your story is being enjoyed for longer than 5 minutes !

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