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Paradox of the Fourth Age  by Alassante 3 Review(s)
pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/19/2008
Very Lovely... Laureanna sure seems to need help and it is good that Elrond was sent to aid her. They are all parting, but it does make sense that Legolas and Laureanna will loose thier memories for a time. Since she has slipped up it could cause problems. At Least her parents seem to be getting together....

Nice read, continue soon...

ellieReviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/7/2008
*spoilers*
I'm so glad they got back to Imladris. I'm glad Elrohir is going to stay with her too, the little rat for even thinking about not staying with her! Glad the Valar will be altering memories so Leggy will have an earier time of things away from her and glad that Elrond now knows the truth . That will be a great help to her. It was delightful to see that Glorfy is with Indil now - paying her "lipservice" if nothing else (hahahahaha!)
Can't wait for the next chapter!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 22 on 12/5/2008
So very gentle a chapter as they each begin to find the peace they need, and Elrond learns the truth of his new daughter. How difficult this knowledge must be for him.

Well done.

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