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| Paradox of the Fourth Age by Alassante | 4 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 12/14/2005 |
| The terror of being in a world where death is the norm, and death by violence to close to being the norm, must be almost more than she can bear. It is a terrible fate for one born in Aman who had never desired, as had Galadriel, to ever leave it. Author Reply: Like going from Heaven to Hell in one step. | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/7/2005 |
| I'm really enjoying this story. Laurëanna's pain when she confronts Elrohir again/for the first time is very sad - as is his confusing sense of familiarity. I also liked the flashback to the battle with orcs at Rivendell, and Elrohir's growing recklessness in battle :( I'm looking forward to seing more of this complex situation. Jay Author Reply: I'm glad you are enjoying it. :0) | |
| Ellie | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/21/2005 |
| I love this story. I cannot wait for more! It is dark, haunting, beautiful, and so very well done. Keep up the good work and PLEASE update soon! Author Reply: Thanks so much for your comments. I am glad you are enjoying it and hope you liked the next chapter as well. I will update more as soon as I can. :0) | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 9/16/2005 |
I love the segments with Laureanna and her parents and the life she had before... I was afraid legolas wouldn't believe her, and she had to be mean to Gimli... She is scared and she has a burden to carry and guilt if something goes wrong.. Gandalf at least felt something about her that was true... Please continue... Author Reply: Thanks for continuing on this journey with us! | |