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| Shadow and Thought by Linda Hoyland | 3 Review(s) |
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| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 1/26/2007 |
| Scary action-filled chapter - I can almost smell the smoke! Faramir, Eowyn and Aragorn make a good team. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm glad you enjoyed this as I'm not good at action scenes.I think the three will continue to be a team in the future now. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/24/2006 |
| Good thing they saved Elbeth! And the beginning of the chapter sounded too happy to last - but they are all getting along much better now and seem able to appreciate each other's strengths. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. When I wrote this first time round, I had no idea how big a part Elbeth would eventually play.This was meant to be her sole appearance.THe story is meant to mark the begiining of a great friendship. | |
| Julia | Reviewed Chapter: 15 on 12/21/2006 |
| I never though Fara was particularly drippy in the original version, but he's certainly not in this revised chapter. I thought his fears--almost post-traumatic stress disorder, upon confronting the fire in the hut and being reminded so vividly of his father's death that he almost shared--were very real. Thank goodness he had his King and Eowyn there to help him and to save little Elbeth. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you like this new version.You are spot on,as I do see Faramir as suffering from PTST.I tried also to make eowyn more protective towards Elbeth. | |