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The Grey at the End of the World  by jodancingtree 2 Review(s)
Rose SaredReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/12/2005
Um, nice to see Malawen in action again - she ever was feisty and I love the way she uses her elvishness to her advantage. I am worried tho' on her own she would be the match for any, but encumbered by wounded. Rose's brow furrows, not good, methinks.
Lovely lively chapter for a gets here to there one, wish I could be so clever - still with you on this story.
Rose

Author Reply: Hi, Rose - I'm so glad you're still with me! And the next chapter should be more than a "just passing through". Thanks for reading!

jo

perellethReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/11/2005
Gee, now you got me soooo worried for sooo many characters! Poor Osta, trapped inside a death trap, poor malawen trying to find the commander, and Where is Canohando? Freiga in search of her orc, and Logi, where's Logi? And now that his grandma is about and away, he'll be bound to fulfill his promise to the river and protect her? This summer won't end in glory, I fear...

Author Reply: They are all in a raft of trouble, aren't they? No, this isn't a good summer for the Shire, or anyone in it.

jo

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