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| The Grey at the End of the World by jodancingtree | 4 Review(s) |
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| Calime | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/12/2005 |
| Oh, you've got the hairs standing up already. It's not hard to imagine how Logi will find trouble, unless of course it finds him first. I have never mentioned how much I like the detail you add in your footnotes. You capture a bit of realism through them that is very satisfying. Looking forward to the next chapter. Author Reply: Whoops, sorry to take so long answering this review - and thanks! jo | |
| Meldewen Ilce | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/17/2005 |
| Wow, Jo, I am so excited to see a new story featuring Canohando and Malawen even if it is going to be dark! I was sad to read of the changes to the Shire and Logi sounds like he is going to be a problem but I cannot wait to see how this story will continue. Please update soon! Author Reply: I'm so glad you're ready to welcome Canohando and Malawen back, even in a not-at-all-a-feel-good story. I guess all good things have to come to an end, even Canohando's protection of the Shire - for Tolkien said that these days, Hobbits live hidden, secret lives. And Logi is - no question- a problem. Buckle your seatbelt, it's going to be a wild ride. jo | |
| Shemyaza | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/17/2005 |
| Why haven't you received more reviews? This is an excellent story and I agree with the previous reviewer that you make your characters live. Wonderful story so far, well written and well thought out. I will await more with anticipation. Author Reply: Thank you, Shemyaza! I'm so glad you enjoyed it - and I hope to get more chapters posted in a few days. They're written, just need a bit of re-write. Thank you for reviewing - I see the "hits" sometimes and chew my nails. (Someone's reading, but do they like it? hate it? what?) No, I'm not paranoid, not at all... jo | |
| Rose Sared | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/17/2005 |
| Jo, how wonderful, you are back! These characters must live in your head because they certainly live on the page. But that Logi is a worry, so orcish I suppose he will inherit his grandfather's immortality along with his nature. Great stuff. More more soon, please. Rose. Author Reply: Hi Rose! Oh, it's nice to see an old friend dropping in to read and review - thanks! Yeah, Logi is Orc to the bone, and immortal. Kinda fun, writing a juvenile Orc - I'm glad he comes alive for you. More soon, I hope. jo | |