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Caught Between the Light and Dark  by Budgielover 8 Review(s)
Anso the HobbitReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/17/2005
I loved this! You are so great with all the little details that show the personalities of all the Fellowship. Poor Pippin, not feeling like they listen to him at all! And i like how Boromir trusts Merry enough to put his own guard down, even if it was involuntarily, and Merry was approached by that mountain goblin. Please continue soon! :)

Anso the HobbitReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/17/2005
I loved this! You are so great with all the little details that show the personalities of all the Fellowship. Poor Pippin, not feeling like they listen to him at all! And i like how Boromir trusts Merry enough to put his own guard down, even if it was involuntarily, and Merry was approached by that mountain goblin. Please continue soon! :)

GamgeeFestReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/11/2005
This gets more fascinating and intriguing by the chapter. Merry shows his quick thinking, and his sympathy when he cared for Boromir, and I loved Boromir's observations on Merry's style of healing. Pippin's inquistiveness yet again almost gets him into trouble with Gandalf, though he did have a point. I'm very eager to see what happens next.

Hai TookReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/9/2005
Yikes! Oh dear, goblins! Poor Frodo being bound up and all, at least he his able to walk, although ti won't do him much good for running away at least he is more comfortable!

Pippin nearly got himself in trouble with Gandalf! That he would make the wizard so mad, yet what he was saying did have truth. Gandalf toldhim to be quiet. At least Sam was able to see and quiet Pippin down.

Boromir and Merry now on their own knowing that the others are about to walk into a trap! I admire your Merry's quick mind! That he used the sugar to get rid of the goblin. I hope Merry's wound doesn't cause too any problemsm ouch. Looking forward to more!

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/8/2005
I love the goblin being afraid of the pony. You never do let our fellowship have a moment's peace, though, do you? Ah, well. It makes for good reading :)

girlofring@aol.comReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/8/2005
Hey Gayle! I did not even get notified about a chapter 3. I did not leave review there, but this is good and full of suspense as always. Update again soon!

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/8/2005
Well, why indeed did Gandalf not send Legolas to the rescue? Maybe, he was just too exhausted from a young hobbit's never-ending questions ;-)
He should admit, that he's made a mistake.

And I like your Merry. He's a very brave hobbit and he did not lose his wits, when he was confronted with the mountain goblin. Now he and Boromir have some more time to think about what to do next. I really hope this will be of any help for the others!

girlofringReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/8/2005

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