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Dear Diary  by Lily Dragonquill 3 Review(s)
BudgieloverReviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/30/2005
These glimpses into Primula's life and thought-processes are delightful. I especially enjoyed her musings on the mother-child bond, and the idea of having Drogo watch her examine herself in the mirror was perfect! As with everything else you have written, entirely believable. The last two paragraphs were delightful - who wouldn't love to cuddle a hobbit-baby, and one especially as beautiful as this one will be?

Author Reply: Thank you so much, Budgie! Your reviews made my day!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2004
Another series I'm looking forward to following. Well written.

Author Reply: Thank you so much!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/13/2004
"A lot of warm hugs and baby-snuggling is very tempting, after all. Do you hear that, little one? You can be as snugly as you want to be. Your father and I will give you all the warmth and care you need."

Well, you have to know that just melted me into a happy puddle! You caught a fearful/hopeful mother's thoughts and feelings beautifully, I think. This child is coming into a loving home, and what could be better?

Author Reply: Thank you so much!
This child is coming into a loving home indeed - if only it would last longer than it actually does.

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