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Dear Diary  by Lily Dragonquill 3 Review(s)
BudgieloverReviewed Chapter: 3 on 7/30/2005
What a logical procession of the story! I was delighted to see Gilda and it made me realize we really are talking about another generation. The shift from first person to third person surprised me at first, then I realized it really was the best way to tell this story. I love how you are making us care about Primula, and wish the best for her and the child.

Author Reply: Believe me, I wondered long how I could put this scene into a diary entry. It just wouldn't work and so I started to put in tiny scenes from Primula's life as well. All the things that are better "shown" than "descriped".

I have come to love Gilda in this story!

IorhaelReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/5/2004
Yeah, Primula should know everything will be alright with her baby. And it should have been vice versa.

Author Reply: She should not worry too much, you're right.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/1/2004
Awwww. So many emotions for poor Primula! It's wonderful to know that she has a lovely baby at the end of it all.

Author Reply: It was certainly not easy for her.

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