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|Tell This Mortal by Chathol-linn||2 Review(s)|
|Linsul||Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 8/15/2004|
|Oo0o0oo0o0oh!!! Excitement! How will they react when they find her??? That is so noble of her, to give up her life!!|
|daw the minstrel||Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/28/2004|
|I was struck by the little detail that Aerlinn comes from a family where the necklace has been passed down for thousands of years from mother to daughter and now she has no daughter. It's time for this to end, evidently.|
The details about the painting in her room were evocative.
Author Reply: Thanks for picking up on that detail of the mother-daughter necklace; it is exactly right. It was this comment plus the other one about the diamond arrow that inspired me to use another mother-daughter necklace. Instead of a characterless diamond arrow, I have Elsila's gift to Elwen as the treasure in Part 10.
I was sitting on a hotel balcony overlooking a beach when I wrote that painting passage. It seemed that the sea and sky were all around me. Regards - Chathol-linn