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The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee  by cpsings4him 10 Review(s)
FrodoLuverReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/11/2011
OMG THAT WAS LIKE THE CUTEST THING EVER! You are really talented keep it up! :)))

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/3/2009
This is truly one of the sweetest tales ever. There are certain stories I re-read when I need a virtual 'snuggle', and this is one of them.

Hobbit Lass21Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/28/2004
Still smiling!! I'm realizing that I have been sorely without my daily Fwo fix.... He's so sweet an' he knows it!! I love the 'nugga' lessons! Honestly, I'm going to need to compile a dictionary of these terms, otherwise my family won't be able to understand me. I've already started sayin' tee-tat..... ^_^ Please continue, you have dozens of loyal fans who are greatly desiring more!!

Obelia medusaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/15/2004
Just when I thought this couldn't get any better... you give us Sleepy Baby Fwo. *dies of happiness*

"Frodo lay sleeping on his belly, long dark lashes pressed into his soft, round baby cheeks, flushed pink with deep slumber. At intervals, his rosebud lips, pressed slightly open against the coverlet, worked at the little thumb that had found it's familiar way into his mouth soon after Bilbo had put him down."

This is a dangerous story to read in lab; it's so hard to stop myself from squeeing! :-\

Author Reply: Oh! Another sweet review!!!!! Thank you so much!

I just LOVE to watch babies sleeping - there's just nothing sweeter! And, when it's a baby Frodo hobbit - even better! :-)

Thank you again!

By the way, in case you haven't seen it yet, chapter 4 is now up!

Blessings!
cp

bobo bagginsReviewed Chapter: 3 on 9/24/2004
I think I am on fluff overload! This is way too cute for my own good! I am so glad Shirebound directed me to your stories! They are too precious! Please update soon, I want to know what other mischief Fwo can get into with his Unga Bee!

Author Reply: Oh no! Not FLUFF!Overload! Hehe! Shirebound is such a sweetie for reccing my story! Update is coming soon! :-) Thank you for taking the time to review!


LilyReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/12/2004
THANK YOU!
This chapter will have me smiling all evening.


Author Reply: I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get around to saying THANK YOU for the review! I really do appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment. More coming soon!
:)

ArielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004
I don't know if my blood sugar can take this much sweetness... Don't you know things that are this cute cause angst mavens to go into sugar shock? Quick! Angst me! Stat! Hheheheheeheh.

Very nicely done, my dear.

Ariel

Author Reply: Good grief! I can't believe I'm just NOW getting around to replying to your sweet review of my little fic! I'm very ashamed!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review it. Sorry about the sugar overload! Hehe! But what a way to go, huh?!? :-)

FantasyFanReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004
Baby sleep! Snuggles and Nibbles! More kitten! You must have a list of the fluffiest, sweetest, most puddle-inducing things, and you're going to trot them out, one at a time, for the chapters to this fic. I'm waiting for fingerpaint and a milk-mustache (or whatever you think up - it will be better than that, I'm sure.) My daughter Raven and I are still going around saying, 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.' Each of these chapters is a gem, THANK YOU.

Author Reply: I'm so ashamed that I'm just now replying to your sweet review of my story! Thank you so much for taking the time to review it...it really does mean a lot to me! I'll have more Fwo and Unga Bee up very soon! :-)

Arwen BagginsReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2004
Well, Frodo's quite a smart baby. Perhaps even to smart for his own good...perhaps. Could it be?

Author Reply: Oh yes! Definately too smart for his own good! Remember what Primula said about him in the first chapter?

"The enormous blue eyes that looked at her were utterly innocent and devoid of malice, but Primula knew her son well enough to know that “no twouba” was not a likely thing. A sweeter, more loving (and loveable) child was not to be found anywhere in the Shire, but Frodo’s bright and curious mind often got him into situations his eighteen and one quarter months of living had not prepared him to deal with."

We will see that bright and curious mind get him into some things he's not quite ready for - very soon!

Thank you for reading and leaving a review!

Blessings!
cp

Breon BriarwoodReviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2004
Oh my gawd! This is just too precious! Every time I see there's been an update for this I get this huge sappy grin that won't go away. (not that I want it to...) Gotta love Fwo's logic and reasoning in this! The mind of that child is just too... too... *gush* I'm just gonna go read it again! Don't take too long for the next one! Nibbles! :D

Author Reply: LOL! So happy to have helped to put a huge sappy grin on your face! I am having so much fun writing this! Chapter 4 will be coming soon!

Thank you so much for continuing to read!

Blessings!
cp

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