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| The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee by cpsings4him | 6 Review(s) |
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| Hobbit Lass21 | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/28/2004 |
| Still cannot keep from smiling!! I'm purring inside...tee-tat.......^_^!!!! Once again, thank you SO SO SO SO MUCH for brightening my day!! | |
| Obelia medusa | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/15/2004 |
| Aaarggggh!!! *keels over from insulin shock* This is too, too precious. :P How do you do baby talk so well?! I can just hear Frodo's baby voice in my mind... And a kitten now! Adorable. *recovers from insulin shock long enough to click on "next chapter"* Author Reply: Oh, no! Another one dead from the baby Fwo sweetness!! Hehe! Thank you so much for your sweet review! QUOTE: How do you do baby talk so well?! Well, Fwo's speech pattern is mainly modeled after a couple of toddlers I have known in my life - namely, Molly and Cody (my husband's cousins' two children). We had lots of fun with them when they were learning to talk! Thank you again for reading and reviewing! :D | |
| Lily | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/29/2004 |
| Thanks to Hobbnit Lily Baggins I found this truly amazing story. I haven't read something that cute ( UN-CA BEEEEEE!) in a long time. Aw, that was so cute....* imagines Frodo rtying to climb up his " unca"'s legs*. And there is going to be more - great. Lily habby. Author Reply: LOL! Your review really made me smile! Thanks for reading! Oh...and a new chappie is now up! Chapter 3 - "Adventures in Waking" | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/26/2004 |
| Count me among those who have melted into a puddle of goo over this story. I'll just share a bucket with my daughter, who can't stop walking around saying, "Awwwwwwwww!" After the first chapter, I thought you couldn't top the cute, but of course the only thing cuter than baby Fwo is baby Fwo with a kitten! One thing I love is even though it's all about adorable baby cuteness, Fwo definitely has a personality here: he's going to grow up to be adventuresome and curious and loving and grounded in the Shire. Not to mention adorable. And he'll have loving memories of his Unga Bee - thanks for that. Author Reply: LOL! Yes - nothing ups the cute anty like a baby AND a kitten, huh? Hehe! I'm so glad you liked it. I will keep you (and your daughter) safely in your bucket until such time as you can be molded back together! :) Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments about Fwo having a personality! It REALLY made my day! I was so worried about making him 'flat' and one-dimensional...that's not Frodo at ALL! He was nothing if not multilayered! More coming soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviews really do mean a lot to! Blessings! cp | |
| illyria | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/22/2004 |
| Oooo...and I'm purring too! What lovely, fluffy tale! I adore it! It left me with a smile and warm, fuzzy feeling inside. Bless you! Author Reply: Thank you so much! I'm glad it brought warm and fuzzy feelings and a smile to go with them! Your review really means a lot to me - especially after reading your comments on reviews on LJ...it makes it twice as special! Blessings! cp | |
| Breon Briarwood | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/21/2004 |
| I swear, I'm just going to melt into a big gooey puddle! This almost makes me want another one.... almost. (I'll just content myself with your version. ;D ) ~Frodo's look back was also wide eye as he cupped his mouth with his hands and whispered conspiratorially, "Beebee beahw hundwey, Unga Bee!"~ Too cute! You really do have the baby thing down. I need more fluff! Author Reply: QUOTE: "This almost makes me want another one...." LOL! Fwo seems to have that effect on people! One reader's comment, where I posted it on my live journal was, "I think my ovaries just exploded!" - LOL! That little stinker has a way of getting the baby juices flowing, does he not! If more fluff is what you're wanting, come see us at live journal - there are lots of hobbity folk there, plus lots of fluffy stories that never end up on a stories sight, but are wonderful none the less - and in fact, there is a community there devoted specifically to hobbit fluff! You can start at my LJ page, then just explore from there! Hope to see you there soon! Oh...here's the link! http://www.livejournal.com/users/cpsings4him/ Thank you for reading and reviewing! Blessings! cp | |