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As the Gentle Rain  by Lindelea 4 Review(s)
HaiReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/25/2004
Oh my, a snow storm! So early in the year too! It lookes like perhaps the company may be staying longer in Edoras then they thought, if they get there at all now! I hope Pimpernel, Ferdi, Merry and Pippin don't get lost! Looking forward to more!

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing. I think they'll be a bit belated in their arrival at Edoras, actually.

Lyta PadfootReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/22/2004
Sounds like they really picked a great autumn to travel abroad! A blizzard in October - thats pretty unusual, though I'm in my twenties and have never seen any blizzard at all. Something tells me that ain't no ordinary storm and the creepy senior citizen will be part of it. At least Farry and Goldi will gain plenty of experience back in Tuckborough.

Author Reply: You are a very perceptive reader! Hope I have the nerve to write out what's in the outline. Thanks for reviewing.

Bluegrass ElfReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/22/2004
I can't wait for more!

Author Reply: Nor can I. Hope the Muse will keep whispering. She was silent all last week, as a matter of fact. Thanks for the encouragement!

ConnieReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/22/2004
Whoa! All I could visualize there at the end was the Donner Party. That's one heck of a snowstorm. I quess the silver lining is that it wasn't hail.

I liked the scene with Farry and Goldi in the bath. They are a sweet couple.

Connie.

Author Reply: The Donner party... ah, yes, we studied them a couple of years ago while learning about the Oregon Trail (and the California trail). Eerie, that you would think of that. *shudder*

You sound a bit like Goldi, finding a silver lining (I think she gets it from her dad). I like Farry and Goldi, too. They will get a fair amount of material in this story, the way the outline reads.

Thanks for the review!

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