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Watch the Clouds Go Sailing By  by Pervinca 3 Review(s)
powerwriterReviewed Chapter: 18 on 3/22/2004
Whoa, everything just sort of happened at once. Anyways, this is such an enjoyable story. I'm wondering how much more there will...

Author Reply: I'm starting to wonder that too! Lol. Hopefully I won't come up with *too* many more chapters. But I do still have to work out how they're going to break the news to the rest of the families!

TialysReviewed Chapter: 18 on 3/21/2004
Wonderful story so far! I love how real you've made the characters. The interaction between Sam and Peregrin in the last chapter was perfect and believable.
For some reason, I really loved this line: "Legolas gritted his teeth. It was not a very elf-like thing to do, but it was something he had picked up from Gimli." I'm not sure what it was but it truly seemed just like them. Excellent work! Keep it up!

Author Reply: I always thought it amusing when I first read that Sam's daughter married Pippin's son - it left open so many possibilities to their reactions! And I'm glad you enjoyed that little Legolas/Gimli line - I had a lot of fun writing it (strange, considering it was such a short line). I first wrote that Legolas was grinding his teeth, then realised that it was probably not something an elf would often do! Thanks for your review!

Mysterious JediReviewed Chapter: 18 on 3/21/2004
Oh, you simply must continue soon! Excellent! I love how Aragorn, Legolas, and Gimli got involved.

Author Reply: I'll try to continue as soon as I can. There aren't *too* many chapters left for this one, so I want to try and finish it fairly soon. I'm afraid that Aragorn probably won't have much more to do, but I still have a few things planned for everyone's favourite elf and dwarf! Thanks for your review!

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