Reviews (4)

This was such a heart-warming tale, Pippinfan! I love your young Merry and Pippin, and how they help each other out even in their early youth. I liked how you fleshed out the character of Mr. Breddo, and how you showed that even adult hobbits can do some growing and maturing. Your description of Pippin's boredom during a nice, spring day rang true for me; it reminded me of when I had to take chemistry in college in the spring semester, and the lab portion of the class was held on Friday afternoon! That was pure torture, and I could just feel young Pippin's restlessness. Nice job! Nice job!

This was very good and lots of fun. I am glad the tutor turned out to be a nice old hobbit after all!

A very good beginning! Glad you continued it instead of ending at the one chapter. The tutor is a bit strict isn't he? I hope the lads have fun!

Oh, that's so cute! I love little Pippin stories; he's so adorable! I wish I could just jump out of the window at my school, but i would DEFINITELY hurt myself doing that.