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yes, just one more of the many many ways we protect and love our families.

I was wondering about this story not so long ago! What a tense moment when Lathron's heart stopped beating! The tension was palpable all along! Only because it was Dot's birthday present I was sure it had a happy ending, but the tension was wonderfully managed!

Whew! That was tense. Luckily they were all rescued. A wood-elf with an allergy to spider bites. That is quite a combination, and in this time pretty dangerous. That baby spider was cute in an evil sort of way. Luckily it drowned of it's own inexperience before it could do more damage. Hearing the comments of the spiders racked up the tension.

I was so happy to see this continued! I hope Nilmandra feels 100% soon and in the meantime thanks to both of you for the continuation. And Holy Cow it was tense! Every bit of it kept me right on edge. I found myself wanting to skip to find the continuation of one thread of the story, but I managed to force myself not to do that. Great job!

Wow, daw! While I'm sorry that Nilmandra hasn't been well, I'm glad that our heros were finally rescued. If she couldn't do it herself, she couldn't have found a better rescuer than you. Lathron being bitten and near death was awful- as evidenced by Thranduil yelling and Tathiel 'hitting' him. Legolas wondering if Lathron had done something wrong in his venom induced fever and then wondering if Tathiel was going to hit him too was funny and sad at the same time. I loved the spider! Whee! He just wanted to chow on a little elf-flesh. Is that so wrong?? :D I enjoyed this a lot, thank you both! Thank you Nilmandra for letting the story be finished, and thank you daw for doing it!

This was a such an great conclusion! Really exciting and enjoyable and entertaining! You guys aught to partner-up more often! And thanks to Dot for getting older!

The squirrel felt the danger and ran away, and now they know why. Sorry you've been ill, too, Nilmandra--flu and conjunctivitis are running through us here.

Ah--he found a spider's nest of sorts in the odd flet. Do spiders build flets, then?

This is great. It had never occurred to me that the reason why Lathron was not a warrior was that there was something wrong with him -- perhaps because one of Thranduil's other sons in this universe, Celebrinduil, also is not a warrior. I just assumed that the king's sons had a choice of professions. But there's no reason why Lathron couldn't have a problem, and it certainly makes for a good (though terrifying) story. I'm glad, though, that Legolas does not seem to share Lathron's inordinate sensitivity to spider venom. It's obvious from what happens in this story that he has the makings of an excellent warrior.

Woohoo! a collaboration between two of my favorite authors... what a treat! The first chapter starts out so light and sweet and beautiful, but the awareness of menace keeps growing and growing in an ominous way... we are so relieved when Lathron and Tinánia come to the rescue... but then to have Lathron injured! And Legolas is so courageous to return to his brother's side to protect him.... already signs of what he would be like as an adult. And then they get rescued again -- but we fear for the lives of those bitten by the spiders. And that's just the first chapter! (At that point, I assumed that Emlin and Tinánia had fled to safety.... silly me!) Lathron was still as a wax doll. This is so chilling! Lathron is my favorite of Nilmandra's great OCs (hmmmm... Lathron, Eilian... do I detect a pattern?), and I almost choked when I read that! Tathiel is the one who rescued and raised Legolas, right? (Sorry, it's been ages....) So what a wrench it must have been to see Legolas brought in, but realize that, as the most experienced healer there, she needed to attend to Lathron, who was most seriously ill. Triage cannot be fun for the people doing it... and then realizing that her daughter was still in danger.... What a strong character to keep her cool in such circumstances! But Tinánia and Emlin acquitted themselves well, too. These are three very strong female OCs, and I think you portrayed them well, Daw. (I bet Nilmandra was pleased!) Realization dawned. For Emlin's sake, she smothered a cry. The feeling of wrongness that had been nagging at her was not caused by the spiders. The part about Lathron's vision, and how Tinánia told him to take care of himself so he would be there for her (when she was in danger and must have wanted to grasp at his "contact") was compelling.... and so full of love on both sides! An ink-dark shape swung toward him, ripe with the stench of joy in destruction. *Shudders* I think one of the things that makes Tolkien's spiders so creepy, besides their size (which is quite bad enough, thankyouverymuch), is that they speak. And you make creepy use of that. (Though I smiled at the "Uh-oh") Anyway, this whole story was very effective... I couldn't stop reading it! Sorry for jumping around in this review, I was just going to say "Well done!" but kept being compelled to mention favorite parts... and I'm sure there were ones I missed, anyway.... Well done, Nilmandra and Daw! - Barbara

Guys, your kindness is overwhelming. I really thought I was seeing things when the story alert for this popped up in my inbox! What a tense start! You reeled me straight back in to the story. Not to mention the fact that I could feel my chest tightening just reading about Lathron’s struggle to breathe. I couldn’t decide who to feel sorrier for – Thranduil or Tathiel. Poor Thranduil, to have two of his sons bitten. And Tathiel is in a tough position trying to stay calm when she knows it doesn’t look good for Lathron – and then to discover that Emlin is missing! Ack. It was a very effective moment, though, when no-one realises at first who she’s asking about her daughter. I love how Bregolas acts immediately. His sensitivity to spider venom. No! Well, that makes things a bit more... complicated. No doubt Camnesta will be kicking himself that he didn’t mention it but it probably just never occurred to him. It stopped. That was a real fall-off-the-seat moment! Thankfully I at least knew that Emlin was with Tinánia. But wow, daw. I’ve seen you write gripping scenes plenty of times but the atmosphere and tension in this whole part is incredible. The whole forest seemed to be close to panic and, well, you can imagine how uncomfortable I was with the thought of that blasted spider overhead. I’m cringing even now. Tinánia is amazing – you can really feel the conflict in her as she wants to just get rid of the spider if she can and yet wants nothing more than to protect Emlin from any further danger. She’s absolutely that brave and tender soul that we all know but with more confidence now. I think I moaned out loud when she realises that Lathron is in such trouble in the midst of all this. Speaking of bravery, Emlin really shines here. She’s just an elfling but there’s some strength in her. Not surprising, I suppose, knowing who her parents are! What had been here, hidden somewhere, were the eggs. Now they were hatching. Oh God. That’s just incredibly disgusting. Way to traumatise me! Poor Legolas. Thank heavens for Ada, who tries to reassure him even while his other son lies in such danger. But I thought that spurt of guilt was very realistic. And then, just incase I was getting complacent, we have Lathron struggling to communicate and then nearly losing himself again as he tries to reach his wife. I’m worn out!! Fascinating glimpse of how his visions work, though. And I love, love, love that Tinánia can reach back and reassure him through their bond. "Whee!" the spider said. My reaction at that point is unrepeatable in polite company ;-) Though the uh-oh made me laugh! And sigh in utter relief. I’m still so impressed by Emlin. She’s just so willing to do what’s necessary. Even when she doesn’t want to leave Tinánia alone. "Breathe, Lathron," his father ordered, so he did. That made me smile. Yay for formidable fathers and obedient sons. He wished he could smile. And that brought tears to my eyes. The scene between Lathron and Tinánia is very touching. He just adores her. And what a lovely insight into his character when she asks him about his visions. And not just his character but his mother’s and his father’s too. I’m glad he had his mother when he needed her most and I thought he showed a very deep appreciation of Thranduil when he says Adar was good about valuing the strength in each of us, even when he did not understand. As bad as it sounds, I’m glad in a way that they discovered his sensitivity to spider venom before he was destined to a job that he’d do wholeheartedly but that would never be his true place. Legolas seems to be doing much better! Thankfully. And Emlin’s back in her rightful place at his side. "I will be a healer and a warrior." Heh. Something tells me that whatever she chooses, Mirkwood will be lucky to have her. It’s interesting to watch Legolas try to understand Lathron. I think they’re very alike in their humility, even though all Legolas realises yet is that he had to act as he did because otherwise his brother would have been left alone. You can really see how having Bregolas and Lathron as his two role models could make him into Legolas of the Fellowship. And that troublesome squirrel is back! He started this whole thing! "I could be safe in more places if I had a sword." LOL!!! Nice one, Legolas. And a very fitting ending :-) I can’t possibly thank you both enough for this. I love this series and it made me so happy to see more of this story yesterday. Nilmandra, thank you for your generosity with this – and for giving me more Lathron! – and I sincerely hope things improve for you. And daw, you did an amazing job with the chapter. You should be very proud of yourself. Thank you for another wonderful gift. I’m so lucky in my friends.

I loved the story no matter who was writing it, Nilmanda stories were the first stories I ever read for Fanfiction and Daws were the second and I shall always love you both, you are most talented! Hugs The Imp

What a delightful ending to a thoroughly enjoyable, though harrowing, story.

Wow - didn't know this was written a long time ago. Just saw it posted now. A real hear-stopper. I had my mouth open the entire time I read this chapter. Very good, very taut, very scary! Now onto chapter 2!

Delightful. I'm so glad Lathron survived the spider bite. And Legolas, of course - and I'm pleased the allergy passed him by. Tinania and Emlin did well - stupid spider. It deserved to drown. You did a great job writing these characters - love them all. I hope Nilmandra feels better soon. And that Dot enjoys her birthday.

OMG, u r still alive. I was beginning 2 think u had been eaten by a giant spider, or been killed by orcs! Cool story. Don't dissappear again please!

I'm so glad to see this finished. And I wouldn't have noticed the change in authors without the explanation - you've picked up the style and characters with no obvious transition. It was good to see Legolas still determined to get his sword even after the fright he'd been through. He's definitely cut out to be a warrior :)

Hey, you never told me you were available to finish stories! This is great, daw. I love the "uh-oh" as the spider falls into the river. And yay for the girls! That must really suck to be a warrior wood-elf with a spider-venom allergy. Permanent desk-duty, anyone? A lovely finish to the story. And Happy Birthday to Dot!

To quote the spider: 'Whee!' A new chapter from Daw/Nilmandra!! I'd more or less forgotten this story, but had to read the update before I went back to read the original post. Poor Lathron. His sensitivity to spider venom is worrying, but I'm so glad he survived. The moment when he stopped breathing must have been terrifying for Thranduil. Tinánia and Emlin are wonderful - little Emlin is so brave! And strange as it may sound, I just loved the spider - its 'Whee!' as it swung on its thread and the 'Uh-oh' as it fell into the river made me laugh. Thank you Daw & Nilmandra for a wonderful story, and happy birthday to Dot for Tuesday! Jay

I'm speechless. I never expected... I didn't... Oh wow. I haven't even read it yet. Off to do that now. Seriously touched here.

The ending was just what I expected from Legolas - still trying to wrangle his own sword! That was wonderful - and I admit I was holding my breath the entire time. And the spider managed to insert some macabre humor in his swinging back and forth and chanting, "Whee!" Tinánia and Lathron have an enduring love and bond as special as the one between Rawien and Tathiel. And the love they all have for each other is wonderful to see. Loved seeing Emlin prepared with her rock - I have a feeling she's got one deadly aim! She and Tinánia made a strong showing together and proves that one does not mess with elve - male or female! I'm so thankful to be revisiting some of my favorite characters and get a peek at what they are up to. Don't leave it too long before we see them again please!

I get to leave the first review on my story, LOL! I love it, I love what you did with the plot threads, especially the scenes with Emlin and Tinania. They come across as strong, confident elf-women/girls. I also love the scene with Lathron and Tinania. They are so happy together. Thank you so much for this. It is a wonderful gift, Daw.

I so enjoy your stories. Please say you're not posting a chapter once a year! Lol! Fishy*

...love the story.....and need more. I know real life has a nasty habit of getting in the way; but you've left us hanging now for a year! Tricksy writers! C

I do adore you're writing, and I'd be thrilled to see any update by you - one of my absolute favourite authors. Would it be rude to prod and ask if you're still writing, or if there's another chapter for this tale on the way? Fishy*