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Flying with the Swans  by Avon

*This was originally written for a HASA  Friday the 13th challenge but missed the deadline.

*It’s fairly soppy (though I think I have dried it out slightly), fairly slight and very short and I’m under no illusions that it is wonderful – but feedback would be, as always, very welcome.  This is my second second-person story in LOTR fandom and I'm not 100% convinced by it.  The other one I think does work in that form and couldn't be recast.  This one, well... maybe it is just pretentious and would do better rewritten in first-person - I'm open to suggestions.

*Oh and there’s a whole bunch of fragments masquerading as sentences at the end – I couldn’t get them to work any other way but I’m open to suggestions.





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